Thursday, 30 July 2015

When i grow up ...

When I grow up i want to be a....

Beep Beep i look behind at the machine and then i look back at the person lying in front of me.I have never taken so much burden before on my shoulder's.I slowly pick up my scalpel and make a move,I make make a square on his body with scalpel.My hands were shaking as i cut through a thin layer of skin.I was surround by threads,needle and even staples it was a shocking moment for me to do this.I pick up my needle and thread it into the thick skin and sew it up.Finally it's finished ,no more burden.

When I grow up I want to be a Surgeon 


  1. great writing Rhea its SO detailed maybe next time try put in some paragraphs so you can make it a higher level

  2. Thank you Isabella for the lovely comment . I will keep in mind to put in paragraphs to make my writing even better